For Carpe Diem – We are to interpret Southard’s haiku, and make it our own. Here is Southard’s lovely verse:
This morning’s rainbow
shares its deep violet edge
with the misty moon.
My version/vision:
the eucalyptus
captures the iridescence
in the morning fog
Thanks for reading!
This spoke to me of San Francisco! I have fond memories of that city! thank you.
It’s a beautiful city, wabi. I love where I live!
I’m trying to imagine the struggles of the captured eucalyptus! 😉
Misty Moon Dancer
I have confidence in both you and the eucalyptus, Mark. 🙂
Clever to relate the bark to rainbow colors. Nicely Steph!
Hank
Thank you, kaykuala..
and a wonderful vision it is
Cheers!
JzB
Thanks, jazz.. that’s nice.
HAS THAT REAL AROMA OF FOREST – WONDERFUL TO USE THE FOG – REALLY BRINGS THE AROMATIC SMELL INTO MY ROOM
Nothing quite like it, pirate, I agree. 🙂
living by the sea, that morning mistiness speaks to me,.,.
Me too, joanne… I love it.
the bark of the eucalyptus.. how imaginative
thanks, bjorn. I appreciate that as I so admire your imaginative work.
Wow Steph … I am speechless … If it’s ok by you I would like to use this haiku for one of our upcoming Tan Renga’s. I would be honored.
As would I, Kristjaan.. by all means! Thank you!