Where you Live (Trifextra 97)

For Trifextra 97. Our mission is to add 30 words to the following three: myopic, dazzle, basin.

Congrats to Matticus, Catherine and E.A. Wicklund for their winning entries this week.

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my eyes
rimmed kohl-black
suffused with myopic dazzle
the iron-rich blood
of my arteries
flowing solely or
is it soulfully
to the river basin
of my heart center
where you will always live

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21 thoughts on “Where you Live (Trifextra 97)

  1. Oh this is gorgeous, Steph. I love the myopic dazzle – you are the only one so far to combine those two words that way. Beautifully written all around.

  2. How beautiful Steph-seeped in love!Loved the ,”:to the river basin
    of my heart center”:-)Am little curious about one thing though-did you miss the word “dazzle” or did you decide to omit it?

    • Maybe the poem is so dazzling it speaks to you without revealing the actual words. 🙂 I’m kidding, of course. It’s that ‘myopic dazzle’ that gets you every time. Thanks for the lovely comment, Atreyee.

      • Eeps!I must be going blind!How in the world did I miss that?You are so right -your words dazzled me and thus my myopic eyes could not see,lol!Sorry for the false alarm 😛

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